hey ricardo, my eye keeps getting stuck in the big empty space toward the top left corner especially since the dark cloud thing curls back toward the right toward the top. I like what youre doing with the yellow to direct your eye town to the spire. I actually liked the background cloud pattern in the "reworked" version better than the final because there were none of those dark blobby shapes competing with the spire. looks cool man, whats this piece for?
Yeah, I see what you are talking about with the spire. This is just a personal piece, it's about a gas refinery that exploded last month in Puerto Rico heheh